Secondary audience feed back of rough cut

We showed our class and our teacher our rough cut, and they gave us some valuable feedback. They said:

"When Blaise is cycling the titles overlap him, maybe you could add an effect to fix that?"

"You could add some grading"

"Add some effects with the titles"
"The sound on the monologue is a bit harsh, maybe soften it a bit."

This feed back was very useful for us and we will take this feedback into account on our work. 

primary audience feed back of rough cut

We showed a small group of people in our class and our teacher our rough cut, and they gave us some valuable feedback. They said:

"It starts in a bit quick - maybe in fades?"

"maybe make the bike a bit faster"

We didn't get a lot of feed back as it was a small group, however still useful. Will will take this feedback into account on our work.

Ident first cut

Here is the first cut of our ident.
We felt that it matched the genre of our film, simple yet affective, it did not require too much editing.

Day of filming Blaise

On Saturday morning Tom and I set out to Gittisham to do the first part of filming (unfortunately because of personal issues Liv was unable to join us) 

First we picked up Blaise and made sure he was dressed appropriately - Jeans, white t-shirt, brogues, jacket, 50's sun glasses. And then began to film; 

Photo of Tom filming Blaise

We had to set up appropriate equipment when necessary 

Tom setting up tripod 

Tom setting up steady cam

 Then to film particular shots, Tom and I had to sit in the back of a very very slow moving car to film Blaise cycling along.

Tom and myself in the boot of the car

 And then we filmed various shots of Blaise cycling through Gittisham.

We took some risky shots...

And whilst Tom and I were setting up Blaise used his initiative to try and stay warm. 

Overall it was a great day of filming.

Filming Blaise - list

Saturday 30th January

09:00 - 14:00



Location: - Gittisham Props: - Bike 
- Cigarette 
Actors needed: - Blaise Equipment: - camera - tripod 
- Monopod 
- steady cam Costume:
- Jeans
- white t-shirt
- Jacket
- Sun glasses
- brogues

location shots

On Friday Tom and I played reccie's and went and took some location shots to see if the area was suitable for filming;

ident planning

Here are some sketches of an ident idea we had. this will be helpful for when we come to create our ident so we know what we want it to look like;